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Random car ideas that popped up in my head:

Abolished clan R35 - Black Edition

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Bern - Market Street_1 by madboi2256, on Flickr

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Kyoto - Gion by madboi2256, on Flickr

Kujira R32 - Widebody Ultimate version (painted in Titanitrot, can be in a darker and more reddish color if desired) (Based on R32 TOURING CAR, probably bears a resemblance with JGTC-spec R32's)

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Red Bull Hangar-7_2 by madboi2256, on Flickr

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San Gimignano - Town Square by madboi2256, on Flickr

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San Gimignano - Town Square_1 by madboi2256, on Flickr

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Red Bull Hangar-7_1 by madboi2256, on Flickr

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Red Bull Hangar-7 by madboi2256, on Flickr

Katerina and Chiaki:

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Special Stage Route 7_8 by madboi2256, on Flickr

Now who said that I called Chiaki a piece of cake? You could even see her leading there. laugh.gif

Also I'm thinking of having Katerina's S7 smashed up by some gang or something eerie and mysterious like Silverblood after a certain race (not trying to specify but I hope you know what I mean) and then either an R35 BE, Aristo or an R33 would replace her ride eventually.

Re-reading the original series now out of boredom. Yes I've read it before but I forgot everything. I think I'm starting to understand Daiki better than before... And oi Gunma, can you give me a little synopsis of the Hachioji series? I want to fully grasp the concept without spoiling everything... Just a synopsis.

I'm also planning to change a lot of stuff about Katerina... no, the appearance stays the same laugh.gif Just some updates to the driving styles and attitudes and stuff and whatnot. Just to let her make sense.

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I was playing Street Supremacy(PSP) on my way home from work while on a bus; changed a few things with the Tsubasa AE86 like:

1. revert the aero kit to stock (with widebody wheels)
2. changed from black to Panda white
3. retained the CF Hood
4. changed the standard FC Gearbox to 3.2 final gear

Then challenged the Jintei lv 49/50 Wanderer (His car's less of a Calsonic replica here compared to TXR Zero where his R34 = Calsonic Skyline 00')

I raced him and I came in my pants seeing the replay and how close the 86 stuck behind Jintei's R34; it was a close match until Jintei braked before the toll gates at Haneda Tunnel (where the goal is). I'll just assume that Jintei's wheels locked up and can't turn (aside from intense high-speed like 200+ mph cornering disability) thus he braked to the side; only to see his R34 kiss a toll booth head on.

I saved the video of course; and may be a good video for Hachioji (where Tsubasa's 86 is reborn)


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and !mma_N00B, you've yet to update the Akiyama Chronicles thread in GTPlanet; and good to know that you're updating the photoshoot list as well; I hope they all show up as planned.
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Posted: Jan 15 2012, 06:07 AM
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QUOTE (Gunma's 34 @ 15 minutes, 44 seconds ago)
and !mma_N00B, you've yet to update the Akiyama Chronicles thread in GTPlanet; and good to know that you're updating the photoshoot list as well; I hope they all show up as planned.

Yup, I have that in mind.

I have to do the first 2 photosets first though laugh.gif

And oh, please answer my questions on the post above yours, the one with random pics of cars that are related to the SL series in a way smile.gif

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QUOTE (Gunma's 34 @ 24 minutes, 52 seconds ago)
I was playing Street Supremacy(PSP) on my way home from work while on a bus; changed a few things with the Tsubasa AE86 like:

1. revert the aero kit to stock (with widebody wheels)
2. changed from black to Panda white
3. retained the CF Hood
4. changed the standard FC Gearbox to 3.2 final gear

Then challenged the Jintei lv 49/50 Wanderer (His car's less of a Calsonic replica here compared to TXR Zero where his R34 = Calsonic Skyline 00')

I raced him and I came in my pants seeing the replay and how close the 86 stuck behind Jintei's R34; it was a close match until Jintei braked before the toll gates at Haneda Tunnel (where the goal is). I'll just assume that Jintei's wheels locked up and can't turn (aside from intense high-speed like 200+ mph cornering disability) thus he braked to the side; only to see his R34 kiss a toll booth head on.

I saved the video of course; and may be a good video for Hachioji (where Tsubasa's 86 is reborn)


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and !mma_N00B, you've yet to update the Akiyama Chronicles thread in GTPlanet; and good to know that you're updating the photoshoot list as well; I hope they all show up as planned.

hahaha! Seems that Tsubasa's 86 is just full of surprise, no? wink2.gif

Anyway, I'd try and think of something. But as always, I'd leave the dialogue up to you. That one replay of yours might be the main factor of Tsubasa's growth as a racer in Wangan, since he's still a beginner in the Wangan Highway, despite being undefeated in Kanagawa Prefecture Touge (Nagao and Tsubaki Line). biggrin.gif

Also, I am currently having a scene in mind...with the song GITS OST Replica playing. Chiaki and Seiji raced for the first time ever and Seiji surprisingly; lost to Chiaki's Porsche by a mere 5 meters; shocking Seiji for he; who hardly ever lose; suddenly lost to a Porsche driver. But the point is that Seiji's taken an interest to Chiaki for being the second person to defeat him (or is there anyone else other than Daiki himself?), and then started a normal introduction conversation with her. biggrin.gif

I'd leave the Seiji dialogue to you ATM; since you understand him more than I can hope to do. wink2.gif

See if you've any rough ideas at the moment. Also; due to network trouble at my house, I am using a phone to type this out in a WiFi area...so; NO UPDATES FOR TODAY crying2.gif

Sorry, everyone... sad.gif
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Posted: Jan 15 2012, 06:27 AM
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Also I'm thinking of having Katerina's S7 smashed up by some gang or something eerie and mysterious like Silverblood after a certain race (not trying to specify but I hope you know what I mean) and then either an R35 BE, Aristo or an R33 would replace her ride eventually.

Re-reading the original series now out of boredom. Yes I've read it before but I forgot everything. I think I'm starting to understand Daiki better than before... And oi Gunma, can you give me a little synopsis of the Hachioji series? I want to fully grasp the concept without spoiling everything... Just a synopsis.


1. An Aristo would best be fitting or an R33. An R35 would make it go through a time paradox, as the R35 BE appears in 2K12, and the latest R35 GT-R, which raymond got was the very first official production GTR35.

2. Synopsis of the Hachioji series? It's still under Rin's hands. If he could get it out for us, then we'll both know the entire synopsis of Hachioji.


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Rin,

do try not to make Seiji lose. He only loses to Daiki and Daiki alone. If he loses to someone else, he'd intentionally lose on purpose. If Chiaki stays long enough behind Seiji, for him to realize how great a driver Chiaki is, then what you can do is make Seiji slow down, let the Porsche win and park off on the side.

Or something like Tatsuya VS Kuroki.

Seiji knows that his Evo's on its ultimate limit on the Wangan line; and is well enough to take down an R35 (the highest) by a slight margin. Anything beyond an R35; international standard in terms of straight line driving, he knows its utter suicide so he'd always slow down when he knows his opponent's car is better in terms of top speed.




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and Rin, Off topic much but there's a title for your Maxi card if you wish to have Hachioji on it:

C1 Time attack; retire title. (retire at this exact spot on the course and you get this title)

C1 Inner Loop NIGHT TIME
5.1km: Exploding run to Hachioji

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Posted: Jan 15 2012, 06:40 AM
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QUOTE (Gunma's 34 @ 13 minutes, 3 seconds ago)
Rin,

do try not to make Seiji lose. He only loses to Daiki and Daiki alone. If he loses to someone else, he'd intentionally lose on purpose. If Chiaki stays long enough behind Seiji, for him to realize how great a driver Chiaki is, then what you can do is make Seiji slow down, let the Porsche win and park off on the side.

Or something like Tatsuya VS Kuroki.

Seiji knows that his Evo's on its ultimate limit on the Wangan line; and is well enough to take down an R35 (the highest) by a slight margin. Anything beyond an R35; international standard in terms of straight line driving, he knows its utter suicide so he'd always slow down when he knows his opponent's car is better in terms of top speed.

Ah...alright then. I'd try and keep Seiji's win-rate in check. I just don't want Seiji to have that "invincible" thingy going on like Takumi in Initial D since he seemed to always win (and we all know some of the wins can be a bit of BS sometimes...like God Hand's case...)

But I'd try and make a scenario where Chiaki can really make an impact towards Seiji's perception towards racing. Something great enough for him to realize that he will eventually have to follow Chiaki in terms of understanding what he desires and who he really is and what he will be...just like Kuroi's philosophy of the SSS Phenomenon.

You read it too, right? The SSS description...

Anyway, for the sypnosis; you mean as in what the story mean and what will it do towards the hero; Seiji himself throughout the storyline? If that's the case; I'd try and make a brief sypnosis out of it. smile.gif

...and the title; now that's one weird title... O_o But it sure looks interesting enough. I might try and get it. grin2.gif

Oh! I almost forgot to ask...can you start a brief dialogue between Takumi and Seiji for the beginning of Day 2 in Hachioji?

I wanted you to start this episode; just like Day 1 so I can get a path on what to work at. grin2.gif

And for the convo; it's about Takumi praising Seiji proudly for defeating Dead Zone and humiliating the AE86 for messing with Seiji and Evos. Takumi's an arrogant bastard, right? I want you to grasp his personality at the beginning of the dialogue so I can grip on everything else later on for the script writing. wink2.gif

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Oh alright... Hmm; I'll make one up on the fly here so just clicky the spoiler box:

SPOILER


Pretty much, to keep Seiji looking cool; I gave him the Squall Leonheart (final fantasy VIII) character.

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Ah...nice...but I wonder who's the "him" he's talking about...is it Takumi or Kujira or someone he knows close?

Oh wait...I think it's Raymond... laugh.gif


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Hahaha!

I knew it!

Anyway, so Takumi IS a loudmouth after all... heh. ;P

I bet he's gonna laugh his ass off after what Seiji has done towards the 2 aces of Hachioji, I can just picture it now...

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QUOTE (Rin @ 13 minutes, 24 seconds ago)
Ah...nice...but I wonder who's the "him" he's talking about...is it Takumi or Kujira or someone he knows close?

Oh wait...I think it's Raymond... laugh.gif


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Hahaha!

I knew it!

Anyway, so Takumi IS a loudmouth after all... heh. ;P

I bet he's gonna laugh his ass off after what Seiji has done towards the 2 aces of Hachioji, I can just picture it now...

I'm updating it after I post it, Rin.
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yeah. The edited script is constant. I'd keep track to it as much as I can while staying in this WiFi area for a period of time... smile.gif

Thanks.

Something extra: I'd do my best to include Chiaki in Day 2. Not as an official introduction; but as a shadow...as she's currently looking for Seiji's Lan Evo while travelling around Wangan Line...but with no avail. She will only be shown without her eyes shown until she finds him eventually.

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Opening script of Takumi, Seiji & Raymond's done.


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QUOTE (Rin @ 25 minutes, 19 seconds ago)
but I wonder who's the "him" he's talking about...is it Takumi or Kujira or someone he knows close?

He was actually referring to Daiki.
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Wow...now that's quite a script...and I can tell SSS is already happening on both Seiji and Tsubasa...
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Photoset A is done. We were supposed to do Photoset B but one guy had connection problems and one has to be early for school tomorrow.

I was using the 2012 R35 for the Abolished Clan R35, just think of it as an R35 with a special front aero modification lol.


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OK. For the rest of the photoset, please strictly follow the car as how it looks like in the screenshots I posted. But yeah; good job.
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Fanmail time!

QUOTE (DK)
Nice story, I hope he keeps up the good work. :tup:
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You are the modern Shuichi Shigeno , Congratulations.:tup:
I like much the InitialD , stages,ovas,manga.

Make videos with your chapters , I recommend you BT music.

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By the way, there should be one filler character whose car's license plate reads 13-37 just for the lulz (probably Pierre's return) laugh.gif

GTP Akiyama Chronicles updated 'till chapter 23. Will marathon down 'till the epilogues probably today laugh.gif

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No updates today aside from getting news that the 450GB PS3 FAT is to be sent back to its owner by the end of the week; not to mention me bombarded with work for the rest of the week as well; only to be able to make updates nightly with just my entire Thursday & Friday morning off.

And I need to scout for a good-conditioned cheap one by then too and hopefully I could transfer my data to that PS3 slim I hope to get. Maybe 80GB is good enough, yeah?

And did some add-ons & changes to the youtube channel so if you're not a subscriber yet; do subscribe.

!mma_N00B, do spread the do-subscribe message to your side as well; same applies to Kuroi & Rin; be it Facebook or whatever. smile.gif

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and !mma_N00B, the GTR35 BE best fits Kitana's R35 (she switches to that from her Lambo on the Manga before the V-series 10-webisodes)
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QUOTE (Gunma's 34 @ 11 minutes, 18 seconds ago)
and !mma_N00B, the GTR35 BE best fits Kitana's R35 (she switches to that from her Lambo on the Manga before the V-series 10-webisodes)

... errr what color and should it be stock or modified in some way? I'm thinking of the stock blue color.

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Kitana's R35 is based off the cross between the GT-R Prototype and the Tommykaira Ebbrezza R35 GT-R.

Mods are:
GT Wing
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BBS LM Gold
Color: Active Red / any red shade (bloody red to be exact; not rosy or pinky red)
(the R35 BE Front bumper is the closest adjustment to a Tommykaira R35, so yeah)

Keisuke's best off with the R35 Proto (for the front bumper) or the Spec V (for the rear and the carbon wing)

Kitana/She appears on par with Raymond's white R35 Demo car on the Manga; both stopping Tomo from catching up to the Abolished clan


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also her exhaust is Semi Racing.

Keisuke's is Sports exhaust / stock (if Spec V; I think proto exhaust doesn't change no matter what exhaust you put in it)

Raymond's is Racing.
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Yo guys...since the network here is still down; I couldn't update anything; except maybe this; Raymond, M.C and Naoko in 60% colored mode. grin2.gif

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Anyway...I had one extra scene debuting Chiaki while she's talking to her CEO about something interesting when Kuroi and I chatted a short while in PM... wink2.gif

And it made me thought of this scene... grin2.gif

SPOILER


Some of you might wonder...what does the "Ghost" really depict for Tsubasa's 86... wink2.gif

Most said it runs like a spiritual being...which was merely half correct. grin2.gif

But Kuroi knew the TRUE meaning of "GHOST" since he do know the word came from the series; GITS...

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Outstanding work as always; can't wait to see the finished version. grin2.gif

Anyway...while listening to this song...I can't help but feel that Tsubasa will turn into a force to be reckoned with by everyone...when he's done racing Seiji on the end of Hachioji's story...the completion of SSS itself...

YOUTUBE ( http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gWRQdArf5q0 )


And yeah; thanks to your description; I was able to fully understand why is it called Ghost 86 now...pretty deep stuffs there dude. wink2.gif

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Ahh Naoko... now I know why your MR2 gave its photo set mates a run for their money laugh.gif

Aaand okay I'll try to replicate Kitana's R35 soon.

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Rin, after reading that spoiler...

I... AM... MOVED... MOVED BY CHIAKI'S WORDS I TELL YOU!! MOVED!!

Such deep philosophies that moved me to do better for this series!!

Speaking of which, how's the final Day 2 OP script for you?

and although at 60%...

*sees Midnight Cinderella & Naoko in Rin's art style*

HHHHHHHHHHHHNNNNNNNNNNNGGGGGGGGGGGG!!!
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QUOTE (Gunma's 34 @ 5 minutes, 6 seconds ago)
Rin, after reading that spoiler...

I... AM... MOVED... MOVED BY CHIAKI'S WORDS I TELL YOU!! MOVED!!

Such deep philosophies that moved me to do better for this series!!

Speaking of which, how's the final Day 2 OP script for you?

and although at 60%...

*sees Midnight Cinderella & Naoko in Rin's art style*

HHHHHHHHHHHHNNNNNNNNNNNGGGGGGGGGGGG!!!

Haha...me too...such incredible character; that Chiaki is...she really is the most philosophical character now at Hachioji...and could really change people's lives through her share of experience of life as a person and as a racer... kiss.gif)

Anyway, I think your OP script is awesome; Gunma...but does that scene immedialely cut off and move to another scene or the race run will continue? Since I think Rin's still not sure of your characters interaction on races; he might not be able to handle it too well... he still has his limits after all; despite the fact that he IS incredibly well-schooled in writing Chiaki's character...
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Errr something went into my mind as well, do you think it would be okay if I'd share it too? It's still about Katerina though, got damn I'm too focused on my own OC laugh.gif
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QUOTE (+-!mma_N00B-+ @ 8 minutes, 58 seconds ago)
Errr something went into my mind as well, do you think it would be okay if I'd share it too? It's still about Katerina though, got damn I'm too focused on my own OC laugh.gif

Do share whatever you like to; I'd be more than happy to hear from you. grin2.gif

Anyway, Gunma 34...I really am impressed with your OP script again. It really gave me a well-thought out stage to plan my storyline without me having to scratch my heads on the starting point as to where to start. xD

And I do thank you for liking Chiaki's portrayal here...smile.gif

She was truly by far the most influential character that can literally change someone's perception towards racing life whenever they talked to her. I am quite surprised that I am able to actually make a character with a depth like THIS.
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