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Posted: Jan 17 2012, 05:44 AM
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Before I start my update on the colored picture...

Here's to you~ Chiaki and Seiji's conversation~~


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Posted: Jan 17 2012, 05:57 AM
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...O___O;

You really thought the scene so well...I applaud you for that, Rin... ohmy.gif

Anyway...yep! That's indeed the true meaning behind the name Ghost 86...anyone thought of GITS will immediately recognize the concept behind Tsubasa's Ghost 86. grin2.gif
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Posted: Jan 17 2012, 06:00 AM
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here are a few main points that you may like to change in this introductory script:

1. Seiji doesn't know that Chiaki's related to Tsubasa; unless proper introductions such as name exchanging then suddenly asking "are you related to that 86 Driver by any chance?"

2. Chiaki doesn't know anything about this Silverblood rumour; as it was only between Seiji & Company who witnessed Daiki's "Battle"/Time attack around Tokyo. The rest know it as just a string of unwanted & dangerous events that occurred.

3. At the end of Day 1, Seiji never knew the name of the 86 driver. Nor has he personally seen Tsubasa's face. Same applies with how well he knows Chiaki. They just met; how could Seiji know her background?

4. How did Chiaki know of what happened with Tsubasa's AE86? Did they meet up before the Chiaki VS Seiji finally after a long time or...? They're guys that Seiji never knew of (minus Kujira).

So "ghost" means the perfect and uniform unity between man & machine that other people/men could see with their inner eyes (not their physical ones). Interesting philosophy there... it's a bit related to my Sanctuary of Speed (read Akiyama chronicles about it; 2nd to last chapter where Daiki & Seiji had another official battle; 3rd if I recall that happened after the Silverblood incident) but SoS refers more to the true experience of speed and its effects on the driver / person manipulating such dangerous speeds as to how they're unaffected if it is truly appreciated.

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Posted: Jan 17 2012, 06:06 AM
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Posted: Jan 17 2012, 06:09 AM
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*Adds Naoko to the picture*

*I died*
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Posted: Jan 17 2012, 06:11 AM
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QUOTE (Gunma's 34 @ 11 minutes, 30 seconds ago)
here are a few main points that you may like to change in this introductory script:

1. Seiji doesn't know that Chiaki's related to Tsubasa; unless proper introductions such as name exchanging then suddenly asking "are you related to that 86 Driver by any chance?"

2. Chiaki doesn't know anything about this Silverblood rumour; as it was only between Seiji & Company who witnessed Daiki's "Battle"/Time attack around Tokyo. The rest know it as just a string of unwanted & dangerous events that occurred.

3. At the end of Day 1, Seiji never knew the name of the 86 driver. Nor has he personally seen Tsubasa's face. Same applies with how well he knows Chiaki. They just met; how could Seiji know her background?

4. How did Chiaki know of what happened with Tsubasa's AE86? Did they meet up before the Chiaki VS Seiji finally after a long time or...? They're guys that Seiji never knew of (minus Kujira).

So "ghost" means the perfect and uniform unity between man & machine that other people/men could see with their inner eyes (not their physical ones). Interesting philosophy there... it's a bit related to my Sanctuary of Speed (read Akiyama chronicles about it; 2nd to last chapter where Daiki & Seiji had another official battle; 3rd if I recall that happened after the Silverblood incident) but SoS refers more to the true experience of speed and its effects on the driver / person manipulating such dangerous speeds as to how they're unaffected if it is truly appreciated.

Thanks for the feedback. Since Day 2 is gonna be a BIT longer than Day 1. I've decided to make the episode script a bit longer than expected. In response; here's what I can think of at the moment.

Re. 1: This scene happens after Chiaki and Seiji raced at the Wangan Line after Chiaki's several failed attempts to find him at night; instead she tried it out on evening; which led to the supposed battle between Seiji and Chiaki. Remember the part where I kinda begged you to create the OP scene of Seiji vs Chiaki? This was supposed to be the aftermath of that scene. wink2.gif

Of course; I still have to wait for your OP scene before I make any drastic changes to this part yet. This was overall still a draft and is bound to have a lot of rewritings and corrections.

Re. 2: Chiaki knew of the incident too actually; except she hardly express it nor does she share it openly; since everyone knew the Silverblood incident was rather ridiculous or much to say; unsettling enough for others to keep wanting to know any further. She read the reports a lot too; just like Kujira. Sorry if I didn't put this part though during my share on this conversation; since my progress of Day 2 was already kinda at around 35% at the moment.

Re. 3: Now this part seemed to make sense...I probably should reconsider this conversation a bit later on...since there's STILL a lot that Seiji do not know about Chiaki...maybe I should hold this conversation later on while considering this one part? sweatingbullets.gif

Re. 4: Again...sorry for not telling you this part. They DO met up before the Chiaki vs Seiji battle took place. Tsubasa told Chiaki everything about the one driver that he lost miserably too and kinda urged Chiaki to think of something that could at least strengthen his Ghost 86 so he could at least even up the score a bit more the next time he faced Seiji...whom he simply refers to now as "The Red Evo Man". It was the part of Tsubasa's description about Seiji's Lan Evo keep pushing away further and further that made Chiaki realize that he could be talking about the rumored Wangan God; Seiji Tsuchiya; which she reads a bit of from Kazuhiko's magazine publish.

Haha...sorry if my response wasn't good enough. sweatingbullets.gif

At any case; I think I should read the Sanctuary of Speed to understand a bit more...maybe I could get new ideas and a bit of reference from that too...somehow.

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Posted: Jan 17 2012, 06:28 AM
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Oh, things change
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Oh, things change
Time passes by so fast
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Yes, just another dubstep track, but somehow those words at the ending may give an impact to the characters. Or the series itself. Or something.
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Posted: Jan 17 2012, 06:31 AM
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And finally; the final update for today (probably...); colored version of MC, Raymond and Naoko~ biggrin.gif

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Next in line; Katerina's mugshot~ and continuation of Day 2 Script.

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Posted: Jan 17 2012, 06:39 AM
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As much as I want to swoon over Naoko now on this pic; I'm (FINALLY) doing my last assessment for my entire course; that I've neglected to do for the past few weeks... make that months (2 months tops)... not to mention work whole day tomorrow; but I AM free on Thursday so extreme brainstorming by then; also the beginning of Viaggio Grande development.

Rin, if you could get me VAs for Viaggio Grande (help your friends build up some confidence if you can XD) they'll get slots as well for Hachioji; call it double benefits XD; and sample them some works I had on youtube too. smile.gif
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Posted: Jan 17 2012, 06:44 AM
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QUOTE (Gunma's 34 @ 4 minutes, 11 seconds ago)
As much as I want to swoon over Naoko now on this pic; I'm (FINALLY) doing my last assessment for my entire course; that I've neglected to do for the past few weeks... make that months (2 months tops)... not to mention work whole day tomorrow; but I AM free on Thursday so extreme brainstorming by then; also the beginning of Viaggio Grande development.

Rin, if you could get me VAs for Viaggio Grande (help your friends build up some confidence if you can XD) they'll get slots as well for Hachioji; call it double benefits XD; and sample them some works I had on youtube too. smile.gif

Actually; I kinda tried...but they still refuse to...since they just can't be interested enough to do it. :/

And I'd feel guilty if I try to force them into it... sad.gif So...there really isn't much promise on this part I am afraid...sorry... D:

Anyway, Gunma...

I do hope the explanation works for you about Chiaki and Seiji's conversation...

and have you thought of the OP scenario yet? Just a little bit will be enough. Remember, it all happened at around 5:50 PM something...and Seiji was kinda complaining in his head about Takumi after the whole test-drive thingy he had gone through with him. Just think of it as a rather bad experience for Seiji in watching Takumi talked and talked while drive dangerously. wink2.gif
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Posted: Jan 17 2012, 06:47 AM
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I'll keep that in mind for Seiji's opening dialogue.

Well, try to be more of the convincing-salesman type; try that if that'll work. And encouraging ones like "you don't have to be a full-pledged pro to be at it; this was done by fans for fans" or something.
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Posted: Jan 17 2012, 06:52 AM
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QUOTE (Gunma's 34 @ 4 minutes, 27 seconds ago)
I'll keep that in mind for Seiji's opening dialogue.

Well, try to be more of the convincing-salesman type; try that if that'll work. And encouraging ones like "you don't have to be a full-pledged pro to be at it; this was done by fans for fans" or something.

Tomorrow's my off day; so I think I can still try one more time tomorrow...but the problem is they're not interested into racing stuffs...even if it's anime/manga type...so I really cannot promise anything. :/

But I'd do my best...

Oh...and I wonder if I can read it at midnight...huhu...your OP scene (it's 11:00 PM here now.)

I'd see if I can wait for another hour or two for it; if not; tomorrow. (Though it was supposed to be today but since you're busy and all...)
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Posted: Jan 17 2012, 07:12 AM
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Outstanding coloring as always, Rin.

And I do look forward Katerina's mugshot too... smile.gif

Anyway, I think I'd also try and see if I can get to see Gunma's OP Scene between Chiaki vs Seiji (if he by any chance is making it now...LOL)
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Posted: Jan 17 2012, 07:43 AM
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Anyway...while waiting for the Seiji vs Chiaki OP; Gunma; I wanna know...during the beginning of the Day 2; after Takumi and Seiji and Raymond started testing drive; is Takumi sitting besides Seiji or is Seiji alone while test-driving his Evo IX with Takumi's settings? And how long will it last about? Depending your answer, I'd see how much I can stretch their conversations while leaving the technical stuffs back to you as usual. smile.gif
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before I call it a night; it's Seiji sitting on the driver's seat; testing the Evo while Takumi trash talks about how great the Evo VI and his tuning is to the Evo IX RM while talking smack about how weak the other cars are.
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Posted: Jan 17 2012, 08:00 AM
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Gorgeous. Now I have a clear idea on the scene. grin2.gif

Thanks.

Anyway; since you're goin' to bed; guess I'd be expecting the OP scene for Chiaki vs Seiji tomorrow then. smile.gif
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Posted: Jan 17 2012, 08:03 AM
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last minute announcement:

!mma_N00B, send to me via email the exported replay files of the completed photoshoots tomorrow. Thanks.
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Posted: Jan 17 2012, 08:45 AM
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Before I knock myself out in bed;

Here's the RAW form of the test-driving session between Seiji, Takumi and Raymond. smile.gif


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I do apologize for the lack of sceentime here for Raymond though...I'd be sure to put more of him later on... grin2.gif

Or if you think this is not long enough; you can go ahead and tell me what else there is needed to be added for the conversation so I can change it right ahead. smile.gif

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...damn, that Takumi sure don't know when to shut up...does he? sweatingbullets.gif
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Posted: Jan 18 2012, 12:49 AM
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Gunma, replay angles for recording at Route X is more than ideal. To me, anyway.

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And so far only A and B are complete... I badly need two extra hands for C and D too... Mind if I won't force myself to let everyone complete all photo sets at once?

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Posted: Jan 18 2012, 02:49 AM
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Next update: Probably the linework of Katerina mugshot~ <3

And confirmed update will be a share of my RAW conversation dialogue between Shino and Tsubasa after Tsubasa returned from his humiliating defeat against Seiji. Shino will encourage Tsubasa to keep doing what is right and to cast off the questions of doubts on the bad sides of the path he choose; and to embrace his choice fully as who he could be;

towards the Road of No Return. (Which was the original highlight text from the preview picture of Day 2)

This is also where Tsubasa begun looking for Chiaki to see if she can fix his damaged Ghost 86.
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QUOTE (Rin @ 17 minutes, 12 seconds ago)
Next update: Probably the linework of Katerina mugshot~ <3

And confirmed update will be a share of my RAW conversation dialogue between Shino and Tsubasa after Tsubasa returned from his humiliating defeat against Seiji. Shino will encourage Tsubasa to keep doing what is right and to cast off the questions of doubts on the bad sides of the path he choose; and to embrace his choice fully as who he could be;

towards the Road of No Return. (Which was the original highlight text from the preview picture of Day 2)

This is also where Tsubasa begun looking for Chiaki to see if she can fix his damaged Ghost 86.

And so continued the Self-Speed-Society of Tsubasa...

I've a feeling that an unexpectedly HUGE future is going to wait for him...after he's done fixing up his damaged 86...

Speaking of which...I wonder when will Jintei show up?
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Route X is just out and I got my hands on it.

Expect shots for Kitana, Katerina, Kujira, and Naoko.

(and my beloved Wangan cruisers as well, though those will end up in my GT5 photo gallery since they're irrelevant anyway.)

EDIT: Kujira takes Route X. lolol

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Posted: Jan 18 2012, 04:47 AM
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QUOTE (+-!mma_N00B-+ @ 1 hour, 14 minutes ago)
EDIT: Kujira takes Route X. lolol

SUCCESS!!!

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Anyway...update~

The brother-sister conversation between Tsubasa and Shino after 1 week where Tsubasa was humiliated by Seiji's overwhelming power... happy.gif


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QUOTE (Rin @ 1 minute, 55 seconds ago)
SUCCESS!!!

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Anyway...update~

The brother-sister conversation between Tsubasa and Shino after 1 week where Tsubasa was humiliated by Seiji's overwhelming power... happy.gif


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I've done Katerina's S7 on Route X too but I presented her car here anyway so yeah. I'll upload Katerina's Route X pics but all you have to do to see it is to follow the link to my Flickr photostream.

You're won't take word of it though because you're too busy celebrating Kujira being the first one to set foot on Route X laugh.gif But did you know... Katerina's shoots where done before Kujira tongue.gif But neither was the first, since it was ME with MY R33 LOL

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