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Probably 4 years old

Time to get a new one.

@added new topic in random here.

Just wondering what are you guys inputs on this summarized plot for my er.. *yugioh like* MTG tcg story, its more like fantasy world compared to physical teenagers with cards tho, its more like summoners battling in different worlds/realms and etc. but mine's a spin off in my own direction.

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Initially, just a story of a teenager (Seth) awakened from stassis and captured to be trained to be used by an unknown religious group, he finds his freedom and escapes, with obvious permanent amnesia, he just really wants to live life easy and just relax, but he kept being forced to be use powers and duel ppl to save himself, and forced to or being chased by ppl who wants to use him for whats inside of him. Infinite Energy/Mana. Or whatever means tehy want from him. He carries a fragmented piece of a soul of a unknown deity (which is never revealed to be who it is) but because of that he is either seen as a high class being which only mades him uneasy. But apparently that's just the 1% of the beginning. Later on, he encounters many people, by chance, coincidence and one other special character that's been watching over him from a distance, later revealing himself as a villain as debuted, aims to destroy him. (Kanye) Turns out he wasn't the only one with a fragmented soul, he has a body double (Zeth), and older one, an experienced one by about 10 years but physicaly just as young, he's more of the experienced-pro-rival kind of archetype. And that guy? He's a fugitive, a dangerous, calculating smart cool ass fugitive, and people yes, mistake the main char. as him, making more pllot based and filler base. These two are essential halves to become the original deity. They both don't want either of this, so they both establish their own identity, with hate for each other. Then after all the whole differences put aside and rivalries from every main character in this story, they join forces to defeat a special evil. Some ancient evil awakened, hidden behind the scenes. Before they set out on that journey, Kanye reveals for like the 4th time, and challenges him on a battle to show his resolve and explaining why he's was so out to stop the heroes from saving the world or some bs. He's preventing them to do so, to protect them, as whatever the quest their out to do, was gonna awake another evil or more worse shizzle will happen. They believe him, but they still decided to do it anyway, he joins to watch over just incase. They also helped him out, but Kanye still remains quiet about many things, I mean come on, anti-hero/anti villain archtype with a heart of goodness masked as evil emo dude turned kinda good. So they defeated many baddies from the bad whatever iono which also killed off Zeth, where later he combines his soul and knowledge and memorize onto Seth, becoming ONE., then they reach the ultimate bad guy (Gwayne) and battle him to prevent more evil from happening., Kanye interupts in the 5+ way battle. Preventing Seth from using the final attack/spell to win, Because he knew, the baddie has a trick up his sleeve in priority as a counter spell, telling him not to do it, which enraged the baddie, which killed Kanye, off a self sacrifice in a way, then that meant giving priority to the rest to finally destroy him. The world is "saved" but pretty much, with so many losses, all this becomes experience for Seth to move on and realize his identity and take up respoinsibiltiy. He is the Chosen One from the Maker. It's obvious who he is. There ends the story. Peace pretty much came after that. But the series did not end there, it was also revealed that Kanye, Master of Darkness was the first Chosen One, forsaken by la maker and which led to the creation of Seth as the new light. Ironically, Kanye always used Darkness and Hellish based magic./deck cards and spells. But it gives off a cliffhanger . Why did a man of pure ultimate evil, eventually realizing he was good the whole time watching over everyone, sacrifice himself, to save the world for peace, when he is of darkness and evil? And he's the original chosen one? Whats going on? Then after this release, I'll work on a prequel story for Kanye, revealing his past and what ever happened which led to him being the sole survivor in his homeworld and how he's the chosen one turned forsaken. then reaching lead up to main series. And work on Gwayne's prequel of how he became the ultimate evil as well, woooo.

I also drew these characters..

This post has been edited by Kenzz on Nov 17 2014, 09:25 PM

Line art is a pain. Every single line is aback forth between pan and eraser. BAH.

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It looks like this before the eraser treatment D:

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This post has been edited by Riisssaaa on Nov 18 2014, 12:23 AM

Here's Kanye, art concept. Abstract messy style.
For the main series.

What do you guys think?

Both arts look awesome

Side note Kenzz, just dont give him the last name west

loolol. He ain't the rapper.

But yeah, the art there was to test my calm and patient ways of attempting to do precise but wavy lines while trying to put more time on it and pouring my soul to draw Kanye.

The fact is, his name is stated as Kayle by others known him by, but his name is Kairne mostly, Kanye was his birthname.

Character Development is:

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-guy too cool, so evil, but wow- -nek minute hes actually a bad- -but he really isn't because he saved the good guys- -then he was revealed to be badder than bad,- -but really, he's just misunderstood- -it all sums up when he sacrifices himself to save the main chars- -later reveals he's the chosen one, but carrier of darkness, souless, but he had a heart- the mindfcuk begins- Wait, there's only ONE Chosen One. Then.... who is he? DUN DUN DUNNNNNNNNN

ochinchin

Good night everyone.

Better drink my own piss

I'd like whatever you're smoking.

f**k my life today

Can my life get any worse???

This post has been edited by mprasetya on Nov 18 2014, 07:07 AM

Do carry on, this is what the board is for.

Yes.

You could have... Accidentally spilled oil on yourself, all over yourself and then
Be unfortunate enough to have powdered piranha bait stick to you which
Then causes you to be piranha food. In an effort to kill all piranhas nomming
On you you could have lit yourself on fire forgetting that at first you were
Doused in oil.

This post has been edited by Riisssaaa on Nov 18 2014, 07:47 AM

please, im worst then all of u:

watching stock plunge down & realize u f**ked up (for a bit)

starting your business & end up going no where

mid life crisis happing at the age of 25

poor as hell & cant afford to live anywhere unless its like a slup in africa

my list goes on & on, but i.guess u no one gives a crap, spend most of my life solving other ppls problems but yet i cant even fix my life.....sigh

Oh, we're playing misery poker tonight? Welp... I fold.

This post has been edited by Jammy on Nov 18 2014, 08:22 AM

celebrating on behalf of a job well done on my scale model kit (1/24 Tamiya Nissan Fairlady Z ver. Nismo "Z-tune custom"), Imma go Maxi today and finish up my 34 and a stage or two on my Cayman then maybe prioritize either the germans or my pending rotary/FD

This post has been edited by Gunma's 34 on Nov 18 2014, 02:29 PM

Good idea. The pot is tiny and the bets are high. I fold also.

I should consdering how to manage my anger

It's not oil, it's petrol.
Also, don't be mad at life coz of an outdated pc dude.
And Azka stop stop saying really silly things.

At least you weren't depressed Azka.
Best bet for playing Misery Poker? Leave table.
//leaving.

is it only me but anyone can't access FB today?

I can, prolly ur area has issues with it or ur net. Dunno.

any way to play multiplayer poker game?

between us WME members...

top gear filming in vancouver right now & im not in vancouver right now, FML

i think this could be rock bottom lol

that's strange... i also can't open google but can streaming animu and open WME.