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Would somebody direct to any post or any topic related to a list of fanfics here in wmexpressway? Thanks
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Mizuki no Densetsu A kaido fanfic, without any real reference to WM other than the wangan line being shown occasionally. Somewhat similar to Myogi's series, being VN/anime format w/ gameplay. but is a 1 person production, based on touge, a bit better art shading for most female characters, easier to follow story. 100X the amount of slapstick humor, character originality, ecchi, yuri compared to any driving anime/manga. plus it's the only true drift story I know of (initial d/over rev is only about racing, and exagerated drift speeds). 1000s of views when it was on zippcast featured. has a fan made alternate universe vid/fic, and fan art.
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QUOTE (chimu-kun @ Oct 23 2012, 02:56 PM) | Mizuki no Densetsu A kaido fanfic, without any real reference to WM other than the wangan line being shown occasionally. Somewhat similar to Myogi's series, being VN/anime format w/ gameplay. but is a 1 person production , based on touge, a bit better art shading for most female characters, easier to follow story. 100X the amount of slapstick humor, character originality, ecchi, yuri compared to any driving anime/manga. plus it's the only true drift story I know of (initial d/over rev is only about racing, and exagerated drift speeds). 1000s of views when it was on zippcast featured. has a fan made alternate universe vid/fic, and fan art. |
Allow me to highlight everything that is NOT about your work. On the quote...I couldn't tolerate your shameless self-promotion of a tasteless made yuri-pornography-work in disguise of racing game any longer for the sake of minors.
" Somewhat similar to Myogi's series, being VN/anime format w/ gameplay. but is a 1 person production , based on touge, a bit better art shading for most female characters, easier to follow story."
THIS. IS. WRONG.
Myogi's work is also mostly done alone...and his is also based on touge, and his art is still BETTER than yours. His show effort in both shading and is showing large improvement throughout the time, while yours remained poorly made and everything is done as if it's painted by a simple Microsoft Paint program.
Also, your story is certainly not easy to follow. For crying out loud, your story skips from one point to another so suddenly that I have no idea what the bloody hell I am watching. And don't go weepy and telling me "DON'T LIKE, DON'T WATCH!!". I wouldn't have cared to type all this out just to slap some sense into your dirty mind if I hadn't endured my sanity watching all these through the end before making my final judgment, which frankly; wasn't far-fetched from what I expected.
" 100X the amount of slapstick humor, character originality, ecchi, yuri compared to any driving anime/manga. plus it's the only true drift story I know of (initial d/over rev is only about racing, and exagerated drift speeds)."
You obviously don't know jack about those racing series as you clearly have no idea how a car works. Even if they're work of fiction, at least they have some physical logic in their demonstration of high-speed driving. And no, your slapstick humor isn't even a slapstick humor. Shoving male leads aside while indulging yourself into yuri-scenes whenever chance given is NOT slapstick humor. It's just poor comedy.
And your character have no originality at all, most of the characters inside are stolen from many copyrighted sources and you gave no credit to them whatsoever, like that Metal-Slug girl which you shamelessly rename as the "Mechanic" in one of the few episodes. Your true-drift story isn't true at all and you've absolute no regards of aligning your car's settings before recording. The wall-rape and poor, awkward driving is enough of proof.
"1000s of views when it was on zippcast featured. has a fan made alternate universe vid/fic, and fan art."
Please. 1000 views aren't a lot. AT ALL.
Myogi's Supido no Densetsu Series overall has beyond 80,000 views and he doesn't even bragged about it. If you have even the slightest bit of dignity and self-respect of your sense of humility. You'd remove this part of your post right now before making a complete tool out of yourself.
I am not being brutal. I am just slapping some sense into you. Your work seriously need a lot of work and re-consideration before being considered into an actual aired show series. At least hire some potential voice actors for your goddamn script!!
You're making everything look like a badly-designed 18+ dating sim game instead of writing a story or even developing a fictional original series at all!!
If you're really serious about making this work, I suggest you to RECONSIDER and REFORMAT YOUR WORK!
This post has been edited by クロイ on Oct 29 2012, 08:51 AM
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The J |
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@ Chimu
I'd stick to text only on this Mizuki thing.. When the artistic abilities of whoever is doing the original art improve then maybe it would be ok to do something like a visual novel type deal. But it honestly takes away from the story when you have lots of stolen art; bad shops that look like they were done in paint; and lots of stuff that looks like it was made in paint using the default colors. I'm sorry to say but the first time I saw it I thought it was a parody, broken English and all....
On topic- I think it would be great to have a subsection dedicated to just the fanfics. Would you guys like that?
This post has been edited by The J on Oct 29 2012, 09:44 AM
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outlaw-2 |
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I know, I am going to bump up a thread that is well over 2 years old, but as my name is mentioned in the list above, I'd ought to share on my situation over these silent years about my stories. As many have over and time again have come to realise, I am going through a severe writer's block, where suddenly, my urge to write just ceased, and my imagination just dies off. One partially due that I lack resources of routing the track routes for Racer 666. I have been relying on Street Supremacy on the PSP to mark out the turns and banks of the Shutokou, only for the PSP to go berserk and brick itself at one point, then coming back to life on its own, then self-bricking once more. It's back to its normal self, but God knows when it'll brick itself again. That PSP is getting old. Most of my cars that I've plotted, I've done the specifics on each cars' max speed on each gear. (Example, 1st gear to 50kmh, 2nd gear till 110kmh, 3rd gear till 195kmh, etc.) That physical list is pretty much lost (It was on an old notepad I had during my tertiary school days). I'd have to re-read the old version of Racer 666 to get the information once again before I can set off in even attempting to revive my writing. Yes, I do my chapter drafts on a physical notepad before typing everything once again on the computer, while rephrasing to make it sound better when reading. Sometimes, a whole paragraph is rewritten on the fly just to make more sense. Once done, I do a brief check on the chapter, followed by the word count. These days, a chapter less than an average of 2200 words is not enough for me. It feels short. No matter, if some of you are asking on the digital copies of my writing... Image size reduced, original size: 1378 x 701. Click here to view the image in its original dimension. It's still waiting for me. Against All Odds, unfortunately, the notepad with its drafts is long gone. I left it in an army camp I used to be stationed at, and the building's pretty much overhauled till nothing is familiar. EDIT: Information compilation on the way. Slowly, but surely, I'm building it up. Got my PSP running again and Street Supremacy as a guide for some of the routes. Might not be accurate, but it'll do, considering that I already lost another source, which is the PS2's Shutokou Battle 01. I no longer have the gaming console. Image size reduced, original size: 1919 x 1079. Click here to view the image in its original dimension. This post has been edited by outlaw-2 on Sep 20 2015, 03:39 AM
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QUOTE (outlaw-2 @ Sep 19 2015, 08:50 AM) | I know, I am going to bump up a thread that is well over 2 years old, but as my name is mentioned in the list above, I'd ought to share on my situation over these silent years about my stories.
As many have over and time again have come to realise, I am going through a severe writer's block, where suddenly, my urge to write just ceased, and my imagination just dies off. One partially due that I lack resources of routing the track routes for Racer 666. I have been relying on Street Supremacy on the PSP to mark out the turns and banks of the Shutokou, only for the PSP to go berserk and brick itself at one point, then coming back to life on its own, then self-bricking once more. It's back to its normal self, but God knows when it'll brick itself again. That PSP is getting old.
Most of my cars that I've plotted, I've done the specifics on each cars' max speed on each gear. (Example, 1st gear to 50kmh, 2nd gear till 110kmh, 3rd gear till 195kmh, etc.) That physical list is pretty much lost (It was on an old notepad I had during my tertiary school days). I'd have to re-read the old version of Racer 666 to get the information once again before I can set off in even attempting to revive my writing.
Yes, I do my chapter drafts on a physical notepad before typing everything once again on the computer, while rephrasing to make it sound better when reading. Sometimes, a whole paragraph is rewritten on the fly just to make more sense. Once done, I do a brief check on the chapter, followed by the word count. These days, a chapter less than an average of 2200 words is not enough for me. It feels short.
No matter, if some of you are asking on the digital copies of my writing...
Image size reduced, original size: 1378 x 701. Click here to view the image in its original dimension.
It's still waiting for me. Against All Odds, unfortunately, the notepad with its drafts is long gone. I left it in an army camp I used to be stationed at, and the building's pretty much overhauled till nothing is familiar.
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Information compilation on the way. Slowly, but surely, I'm building it up. Got my PSP running again and Street Supremacy as a guide for some of the routes. Might not be accurate, but it'll do, considering that I already lost another source, which is the PS2's Shutokou Battle 01. I no longer have the gaming console.
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Great to see you up and running again Outlaw-2
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